Name/ Zero Starbreeze

Age/ 19

Height/ 6 feet (About above-average adult size)

Weight/ 165 lb

Apperence/ Has a Black Cape, with white shirt with chainmail armor under. Also has Black Leather Pants/armor. Also has a white headband with Black hair going down to his neck.

Personality/ Stubborn, Tough, Can be sensitive at times but when he's in battle he sheds the niceness and goes all out.

Weapons/

Avenger: A holy sword strapped to his side apparently made from the heavens. It posesses Holy abilitys that can be unlocked with deep prayer and belief. Allows Zero to use a few abilities of light.

Oblivion: A evil sword strapped to his back, made by Hades himself. Posesses Dark abilitys and can be unlocked with a strong heart. When Zero fights he has his Avenger in his right hand and Oblivion on his left.

Zero Rings: Two rings. One floating around each arm around the elbow. Thesee rings are of medium length and are just non-elemental rings enchanted with a Permanant Gravity charm. These rings are very sharp but does not harm Zero, the user. The rings appear when Zero calls their names which is simply Zero Rings.

Weapons In Half-Angel Half-Devil Form/

Omega Buster: When Zero can risk most of his life energy he can combine his two swords and chant "I call apon thee omega give me strength!!!" He'll instantly gain a amazing sword called Omega Buster. This magical sword's colors warp from black to white, flowing with holy and dark energy. This sword requires two hands and Zero has to be in his half-angel half-devil form.

Weapons In Angel Form/

Alexander's Wrath: A long sword of average size and length and the color of the blade metal and hilt is white. The blade has mystic holy abilities and it allows Zero to use a little Wht Mage abilities. Also sword has 3 angel decors on each side. The sword is strapped to Zero's back, and is easily accessed by Zero's right hand.

Alexander's Bow: A bow the size of a average bow although the arrows are dipped in holyness. when Zero calls the name of the bow it instantly materializes in Zero's hands and the sword disappears and arrows appear on Zero's back inside a quilt. The bow and arrow has angel decors on it


Background/ Zero has been a wanderer most of his life. Having no money he started to turn into a thief day by day, stealing food to keep himself full. But soon he realized all this stealing made him go too far as he soon started to steal stuff like money and weapons. Soon he was a wanted criminal and realized he was turning evil. He then gained a sword known as Oblivion which was made by Hades himself. He never wanted to be evil he just needed food and gil so he decided to turn himself in. After that good deed the gods told him if he helped fight evil and never commit a crime again they'll free him. Heagreed and gained another sword known as Avenger. Now he has in his two hands one sword made of evil and one made of good.

Armor/ Magical Armor possessing amazing abilitys. Has the elemental properties of Holyness and Darkness, therfore making those two elements uneffective on Zero. Has white Color and a Angel symbal on one side, and black color and the devil's symbal on other. But the armor is light so Zero is able to move around with ease.

Ascention/

-Half-angel Half Devil---Zero must be near death and must have both swords at his disposal. He must sacrifice about all his life energy, his body will shine and his face will transform. After a blinding light Zero will be shown with long White hair and black eyes, Still White Skin, A White Angel Wing coming out of his left side and a black devil wing coming out of his right. He'll have a sword called Omega Buster. Also in this form Zero is able to fly and use the most powerful abilitys he can use. If Zero gets really and I mean REALLY beaten down in this form he'll transform back into his old form, most likely dead.

-Whole Angel---Can only change into this form when in Half-Angel Half-Devil form. When transforming, the devil wing will shine and turn white and transform completely into a angel wing, Zero's eyes will turn from black to white and his long white hair will turn brighter. Zero gains two new weapons after this. Also Zero's shirt reappears white and has angel decor on the middle.

Spells/

Holy: Takes out Avenger and points it at the sky and chants a bit. The sky will turn white and lifeforce/energy comes within Avenger. Zero then slashes at foe with it from afar to throw a beam of pure energy at foe causing major damage. Zero then loses some energy.

Meteor: Takes out Oblivion and points it at the sky chanting a bit. The sky goes Dark and pure evil energy goes into the sword. Then Zero launches it into the ground causing a Huge meteor coming down right on foe. (Doesn't destroy planet don't worry. Causes Zero to lose some energy

Protection: Zero lifts hi elbow's so that the rings are facing forward. Then when Zero does a magic chant. "Sori Askaora Protecto Mendo" The rings spin furiously, passing through Zero's hands as if they're transparent, and form a protective barrier surrounding Zero's entire body.

Spells Only in Half-Angel Half-devil Form/

Omega Flares: Zero's right and left hands starts to turn bright full of energy and 2 flares start to slowly form. When launched huge 5 meter Flares head straight for foe and act as seeker missles so they can't be dodged.

Wormhole: A tear in the space-time continum appears and Zero and his foe(s) appear in a floating piece of earth in a world of complete other darkness and light. This only lasts 1 min but all of Zero's abilities our doubled in strength as well as his sword. Also if Zero gets beat here and transforms into his old self, he'll be devoured by darkness.

Spells Only In Angel Form/

(Upgraded) Holy: Zero sheathes his sword and extends his left and right palms together. Zero chants "El Auro askaminhas Holy" and 3 ball of pure holy energy appears at his palms and shines so brightly that everyone except Zero gets blinded. Then all of a sudden the balls of light shoots from Zero's palms and hits the opponent at super fast speeds.

Heal: Simple spell. Zero chants "El Curo asta (Whoever he wants to heal)" Almost all of that person's wounds are healed unless they were severe.

Special Attacks/

Forever Zero/ Takes Oblivion and lunges at opponent. But before contact Zero raises his hand and surrounds his foe with utter darkness with no way out. then all of a sudden Zero appears behind the foe and slashes him 5 times.

Aurora Beam/ Combining the two swords together, pointing at foe, and chanting a bit, Zero can launch a incredible energy beam at his opponent which will really hurt the foe. Zero will also get drained of some energy afterwards.

X Slash/ Takes out two swords and points them at foe. Zero jumps into the air and either lands in front or in back of foe slashing him in the shape of an X with both swords.

Shockwave/ Simple attack made when Zero slashes Avenger, Oblivion, or both at the air creating a shockwave(s) that hit the opponent hard. Also causes a little knockback

Chaos Flames/ holding his swords close together, Zero chants "Dakamak aschaotico Fira" and nothing seems to happen but once he stabs avenger into the ground flames of light spit out under the ground where the foe(s) are and when Zero stabs Obilvion into the ground more flames spit out of the ground where the foe(s) except of darkness. After 5 seconds, the flames will explode and cause major damage to the foe.

Dasher Rings: Zero lifts his arms so that his elbows point at the opponent. Zero concentrates with a mind thinking of nothing but pure light. The rings are powered and launch from Zeros arms at a extremely fast speed right into the opponent. They pass so quick that it does not look like the opponent was affected at all until the areas the rings hit start to bleed ammensly. ((The rings are able to pass through Zero's body like he's transparent))

Special Attacks Only in half-angel Half-Devil Form/

Soul Lancer: Zero has to wind up his arm, then with amazing strength and agility he throws Omega Buster into the sky. The area the sword got thrown into turns bright as the other parrts turn dark. The sword then comes down at lightning fast speeds down on the foe. Really the sword won't kill him but the sword will pass through his body like spirtual or ghost like. The foe will feel major pain from the inside-out. The sword then reappears from the ground back into Zero's hands.

Angel's Fists: Zero raises his hand up into the sky and pure energy goes into his fist. Zero then punches at foe as if he was up close. A spiritual fist heads right into the foe at wherever Zero aimed his fists. The fist passes through the foe but does major damage from the inside of wherever the fist hit. It won't kill the foe or the organ or muscle it hit but it will start to feel as if you broke it anyway.

Special Attacks Only In Angel Form/

Darkness Destroyer: Zero points the index of his sword upwards torwards the sky then turns it in a circle, making a symbol of light appear above Zero's head. The symbol goes down Zero's body into the ground and then the ground will shake furiously. Light appears in cracks of the ground and then the ground tears apart and a barrier of light surrounds Zero extending up to 1-5 miles, doing amazing damage to foe(s), enemy(ies), and anything op pure darkness.

Sky Of The Heavens: Zero flys into the air so high you can't see him at all. The sun gets bright and the clouds start to form together. Pretty soon you can see individual white spots in the clouds and a little speck appears. It is Zero smiling and his right hand is extended into the air. When he throws his hand down the white specks in the clouds shoot out and beams of Holy start to wreck havoc on the field him and his opponent is at. The number of beams is 12 and each one can do massive damage.



Special Abilites/

Teleportation: Teleports anywhere with 20-30 feet.

Regeneration: Sheathes swords and chants. A aura surrounds Zero and heals some of his wounds.

Shadow Images: After chanting a bit and draining some of his energy, he can make up to 4 shadow images of himself, making there 5 Zeros on the field. And by draining a little more energy the Shadow Images can do damage too. But the shadow images are fragile and will automaticly disappeared when hit.

Spcial Abilities Only In Half-Angel Half-Devil form/

Teleportation: Can transport anywhere Zero wants to transport to. Anywhere in the battlefield,town, or even the world. The world is Zero's only limit.

Special Abilities Only In Angel Form/

Revive: Zero extends his hand into the air, flapping his wings upwards. Zero's hand will turn bright and be surrounded by Holy. Zero chants "Aska Oros Taramaka Elpiro Revivo _____" Zero will turn bright and scream as he
transform back into his original self. Whoever Zero wanted to revive...no matter where that person is, will appear on the ground below Zero. Zero will be totally out of strength after this. Plus this Ability only works once every year.



Ultimate Attacks/

ZeroSlashes: Zero points the tip of his swords at the foe then points them upwards. A ball of energy formed at the tips. Zero then Slashed at the foe as if he was right up close and sharp energy blades slashes the foe about a infinate amount of times until Zero stops.

Void Slash (Only used with Tas and Zero): This attack can only be used by Zero and Tas plus both must be concious and have lots of energy. Zero and Tas both concentrate and let energy release into there swords. Zero calls apon the elements of Holy, Darkness, and even the Zero element, Tas calls apon the elements of Fire, Ice, Lightning, Water, Earth, Wind, and etc. Then both lunge at the foe at tremendous speeds and start to speedily and quickly slash the opponent exactly 100 times. The speed of Zero's and Tas's slashes opens a void amd sucks the foe into it. The foe cannot use any means of attack, magic, abilities. There can be NO ESCAPE FOR 5 POSTS (Can't be from the foe at all and you can't just post crap so he can be automaticly released). No matter how strong the foe there is no escape. Afterwards the opponent will be released in a very weak state or death. ALSO if Zero and Tas uses this move once more they'll be the ones sucked into the void. Its like a repeating cycle.



((I'm still working on Zero's angel form please be patient))

it's about time.....but add some more stuff to your character and I think i already told you that....... :lol:

YOUR CHARACTER NEEDS A SERIOUS UPGRADE, OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH YOU NEED HELP... From me.. eh hmm never mind.

It's true his character needs some movs but if he wants us to help then it's his decision....

Yes help please....

I guess that's our cue.... :lol:

*nods* First fix the annoying gramatical errors!

I really don't care about grammer. I need to see some moves and a history.

It is annoying...

Name:Zero
Age:19
Height:6 feet (About above-average adult size)
Weight:165 lb

Weapons: Avenger a Holy Sword made from the gods, and Obilvion a Dark Sword made from the underworld.

Armor: Tough Steel Armor that has the elemental properties of holy and darkness.

Spells: Holy, Meteor

Abilitys;

X Slash: Slashes in shape of a X with both Avenger and Oblivion.

Forever Zero: Causes foe to get crushes by darkness and then out of nowhere gets struck by Oblivion 5 times

Teleportation: Teleports anywhere within 20 feet

Rainbow Beam: Combines Avenger and Oblivion together and shoots a massive energy beam at foe causing major damage

Regeneration: Recovers strength and heals wounds


Description: Not applicable.

LOOK HOW MUCH PRETTIER IT IS!

Due to Cloudmeister asking me to help him with his character, I post a version of it I have revised myself. I do not want to see this anywhere else on the forum because I only post it here for you to learn and revise from. If I do, I will simply ask the moderator of that forum to delete all the posts you made with my version of this character. Now, learn from this and make yourself better. Feel free to take SOME and only some ideas from it. Also excuse the double post please ...no one else had posted and I need to get this out here.

Name: Zero

Age: 19

Height:6 feet

Weight:165 lb

Weapons: Avenger a Holy Sword made from the gods, and Oblivion a Dark Sword made from the underworld. Avenger is a large great sword that slides into a sheath on Zero�s back. It�s blade is wide and has designs of a dragon floating up the middle. The hilt is made of an ivory with metal as a support beneath it. On the hilt is a strand of white cloth said to have floated from the heavens with the sword. Oblivion is a smaller sword that sheaths at Zero�s side. Much more like a katana it is sleek and slender, made especially for the slaughter of anyone who stands in its way. The blade is black as midnight and has a line of red traveling down to the tip where it is sharp. The hilt is made of a red mahogany slightly covered with a weaved black cloth for grip support. On the back of the hilt is a face of the Devil himself. Also, strapped to Oblivion is a bloody black cloth that is said to have been given straight from the underworld.

Armor: Zero wears a full plate armor that has the elemental properties of holy and darkness. The helmet of the armor is completely black and lined with white around the eye sockets and forehead areas. The main body of the armor is black as well. On the front of the body is a small white halo near the shoulder of the armor. Covering the side of the armor in a blood red crimson is a depiction of hell and darkness. The rest of the armor is the same as the helmet, dark and outlined with white. The special thing about the armor is not it�s elemental properties though, it is what it is made out of. The steel is so hard and strong that it seems to have been forged in the very fires of hell. But also, it is so light that it is like it has been blessed by the gods themselves.

Spells:

Holy: Zero takes avenger and points it at the enemy. From the tip of the sword a bright light begins to glow making a small sphere at the end. The small sphere then disconnects from the sword and launches at the opponent. Once the sphere touches the opponent it expands engulfing them inside of it. From inside streams of holy light strike the opponent causing damage. Extra damage if used on an opponent based on darkness and hate.

Meteor: Zero raises oblivion to the sky and makes a large circle around his head. From where the tip of the sword was a red outline can be seen in a circle. The red outline then rises high into the sky and makes a very large dark cloud. Then the red ring falls from the sky and hooks in Zero�s opponent making it impossible for the opponent to move very far or very fast. Then falling from the sky a dozen or more large meteors head straight at the opponent.

Abilities:

X Slash: Unsheathing both Avenger and Oblivion Zero charges at the opponent with the two swords in an X shape in front of his body. Once reaching the opponent the two swords make contact and like a soul image another form of Zero appears behind the enemy. The first Zero that charged the enemy is now dressed in a full white holy armor holding only Avenger. The second Zero form that is behind the enemy is dressed in a dark evil armor holding only oblivion. The two Zero�s then slash down at the enemy leaving an X mark on the opponent�s body. The two forms of Zero then come back together to make one again.

Forever Zero: Zero unsheathes oblivion and charges the opponent with oblivion facing south. When it seems that Zero will just crash into the opponent Zero�s body seems to fade and goes right through the opponent. From the ground beneath the enemy oblivion sticks up and engulfs the enemy in darkness so dark that sound is not even heard. From behind Zero charges at the enemy once more completely silent and slashes the enemy five times and the darkness then disappears.

Teleportation: Teleports anywhere within 20 feet ((no need for fixing�pretty self explanatory))

Rainbow Beam: Combines Avenger and Oblivion together and shoots a massive energy beam at foe causing major damage ((ungh, I already edited most of it you can do this one))

Regeneration: Recovers strength and heals wounds ((again self explanatory))


Description: Not applicable. ((you should do this not me))

Thats WAY better than the other version lol.

Well of course ^.^ I just hope cloud will learn from this. Your character can be so great! Just put some time and effort into him and tada! Just gotta try a little.

Yay i learned much thanks senkrad

No problem. Glad to help.

There is a complete differance

A complete difference in what Sesshomaru...? In the way help should be done or in the character?

I meant the character Senkrad.

Hm...ok then. Maybe because I made it? Or were you talking about the new edited version he made?

the new edited version SENKRAD.

*walks away*